I never really understood what "Advanced Critique" is... Is it saying what I think is wrong with the work or just to give you details that you already know? Well... here it goes anyways.

I like this piece, well, I really enjoy all of your drawing to tell the truth. Of course, your drawing of your saber character, Sonja, is really my favorites. I do like how this one turned out. I've never seen a saber with wings before.

A friend of my suggested to me once to make a character with wings, but I dismissed it as nonsense. But, after seeing your drawings, it's really changed my mind of a prehistoric cat having wings. It really looks nice! It adds something that makes the cats look... cute. (Yes, I don't have a better word... ) And it really add to the cuteness of this piece of art.

The saber would have looked cute enough on it's back, with it's paws the way you have them, but something about the wings really sets off this photo.

Anyways... I think I babbled enough. Bottom line is that I LOVE this character, and think that your art work for it is amazing! I really hope to see more of your work!

It's about giving advice to the artist where he/she could improve, either it's the pose, anatomy, paws, ears,..

Thank you very much for this wonderful comment To be honest I love drawing Sonja and I love how my pics of her came out ^.^

Well I always loved sabres and wanted to fly so the combination of wings with a big cat had to be born hehe and don't worry if you can't find another word^^ Oh and is the part about the wings setting the pic off a good thing I'm kinda off today xD

Thanks I'm really flattered if someone likes Sonja!! =3 And my pics for that I'llactually submit two more works today so keep your eyes peeled on your devwatch

Thanks again

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I meant for the wings to be a good think. I've never seen that before, and I though that it looked really good!

Aha thanks! <3

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AWWWW SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really love your character!!!!!!!!!!

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*purrrrrr* Thank you very much =3 I'm really flattered that you like her

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hehee welcome !! I love cats with sabers, and the wings are nice tooo!

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Sabretoothed cats have always been my fav + I've always wanted to fly to so the wings are a must

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yeaaah I love sabretooths too aww it's absolutly the perfect combination!!

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Indeed!

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